Monday, February 19, 2018

My Recount

I am learning to write my own story.
By: Melie
To-day was a wonderful happy day and my Mum and Dad took us on an excitement holiday. It was the water park. We saw many people and me and my brothers saw some kids and then my Mum and Dad said, "Come over here and slide" and then he said, "home time' and I went to sleep.

2 comments:

  1. Delz Langi-FonuaMarch 1, 2018 at 9:20 PM

    Awesome story writing Melie. I am so proud of you. ��

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  2. Thank you Melie. It is always a great experience to spend it with Mum and Dad. Great story. Keep it up.

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