Friday, February 23, 2018

My story

I am learning to write my ideas down.
By David.
I am sad for the poor people because they don't have shoes because we need to help the poor and they will be happy. It is too sad for them. We need to give money for them to buy toys  to play with and we need to get to that place but we don't have much money for us but it is just very sad for them to eat on a very small table. It is sad because they are too far away from us.

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  1. Well done David. I am so proud of you. Keep up the good works, and always remember that Sharing is caring.

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    1. Thank you Solomone for supporting your little brother.

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  2. You have a very big heart, David. Nice writing.

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    1. Thanks Mr C for you support and encouragement,really appreciated

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  3. Awesome writing David. You’re very thoughtful and very kind. I really enjoyed reading your writing :)

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    1. Thank you Karissa Tai for your kind word.

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  4. Hi vita well done ofa atu

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  5. Well done David. Keep it up. I really enjoyed reading your story about helping the poor. I am so proud of you.

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    1. Thanks Mrs Pulotu for teaching and helping David progress in his learning.

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  6. David,

    I am so proud of you. The two great commandments are 1. Love God with all your heart and 2. Love thy neighbor as thy self. In Proverb3:27 Do not pass by a man in need, for you maybe the hand of God to him. I love your story David and keep up the good works.

    Tika

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